小四英文作文

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小四英文寫作  Writing 

Choose one of the titties below and write a narrative (story). Write at least 60 words.

1. An Adventure
2. Lost Treasure

Lost Treasure

  A long time ago, people like pirates hunted for treasure and became rich, but there was a hidden treasure in the Pyramid of Egypt. Anyone went to find the treasure will be forever gone.

  50 years later, a brave boy called Mike had read this story from a history book, he believed that the treasure was true. His grandfather gave him a piece of old paper which showed where the treasure hid.

  Mike had his own exciting adventure, he passed through the pyramid and saw a magic stone. The stone had lead (led) him to a dead end, he kicked the wall for 3 times. Suddenly, the ground shaked and Mike fell through and landed. He finally found the treasure that was full of golds and jewels.